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Canto Nine

The rage of Archimago has
Set loose his wicked host,
Led by the knights, they do prevail,
As foretold by the ghost.
1.
How rare for guilt to recognize its sin;
And innocence lacks all self-consciousness
By definition; How can we begin
To understand them, let alone profess
Contrasting judgment of their worth, unless
We’re willing to make plain just what we mean
When we discuss conditions which express
So much of what disturbs the human scene?
To do so, we’ll describe the wizard and the queen.

2.
The wizard, armed with magic and with might,
Could use his strength to do his fellows good —
Instead he craves to sate his appetite,
And leads his soul into a darkening wood;
He does not care to do the things he could
To benefit the world, promoting peace;
Instead, the thoughts beneath his wizard’s hood
Progress no further than himself, and cease
To dwell on anything besides pleasure’s increase.

3.
And don’t be fooled by his ascetic mien —
The appetites that drive him are not such
That he seeks pleasures obvious and plain
As lust and greed and gluttony may touch;
The cravings that he services reach much,
Much deeper, with their satisfaction drawn
From lodes of poisoned gems he craves to clutch:
Triumph he craves — to win — to take the pawn
Amid the mad confusion that he thrives upon.

4.
And he will be the calmest in the crowd
When panic spreads among the wild stampede;
He will stand silent when they cry aloud:
Disaster is upon us! As they beg and plead
For help — petitions he will gladly heed;
He lays his plan as he perfects his plot
To give you everything you’ll ever need,
Providing, in return, you cast your lot
With his design to bring the world to ruin and rot.

5.
Though ruin and rot will be far from your mind
As you are overwhelmed by wizard’s craft —
Devices, fascinating in their kind,
The product of such skill — you would be daft
To doubt the motives of one who can graft
Inventiveness to such machinery;
And yet, as you admired, the wizard laughed:
By baubles such as this, it’s plain to see
Your soul is bought and bound in utter slavery.

6.
For welcome contrast, contemplate the queen:
No birth, no conquest put her in her place,
No breathless stratagem, nothing so mean,
And not her supple form and pleasing face,
No bargain and no game and no disgrace
Manipulated in clever maneuver
Snatched up first prize in some imagined race;
By virtue of no thing that might reprove her,
She’s at once admiration’s object and prime mover.

7.
In one so artless, what might we admire,
If not her face and form and clever ways?
The motives of idolatry require
Such attributes that stun and that amaze;
But we are not engaged in idle praise
Of some mere idol, staid, inanimate,
Presenting its stark form to gape and gaze
Upon in awe and admiration, but
A human being, a human heart that’s never shut.

8.
A heart that’s open to the world around,
A mind that keenly measures things unseen:
Our feelings, our frail hopes that yet abound
Amid the disappointments that have been
Our sad, persistent plague — all this the queen
Takes in, then nurtures us accordingly,
Upbraiding pride, assuaging woe; We glean
From her fresh fields a natural remedy
To heal our wounds, abate our pain and misery.

9.
It’s all of this places the crown upon
Her worthy head, and it is all of this —
The happy, ongoing phenomenon
Of love and service and of selflessness —
That maintains in our souls the premier place
We give to her, where she may rule and reign,
Knowing her object is our happiness,
Toward which she’ll firmly guide us, and sustain
The freedom we must exercise, and must maintain.


* * *


10.
So now our story takes us to the scene
We have anticipated for some time;
It’s dawn; The wizard comes to take the queen,
Determined to commit whatever crime
Required, to ally with the slumping slime
Of all the earth to force his vicious end —
To clasp within his talons the sublime
Queen Glorianna, to distort and bend
Her soul, and all connection to her people end.

11.
Let us recount the forces in the field:
There’s Enri to the north, with Pollopint
His giant, who’s been told the town will yield
Him toys and food to sate his heart’s content;
Gross Mammon to the west, with Onpresint
His dragon, belching out hot, flaming breath;
Southward Fides arrays believers violent,
Rehearsing frenzied chant and shibboleth
To rouse their zeal to deal all unbelievers death.

12.
And to the east, with Archimag himself,
Ayez, who lives and breathes but to obey,
Will gladly follow any dog or wolf
Who’ll let him in his pack and share the prey
They kill together as sufficient pay
To buy his soul and rent his dignity;
Legions of followers, this self same way,
In turn will follow him, and happily
Perform the vilest crimes, and call it loyalty.

13.
The Archimago chose the eastern wall
As his primary target for attack;
He will use Ayez and his force in thrall
Whose vicious savagery will never slack;
Also, to make it simple to keep track
Of Arthur and his knights, he will hold them
Together, with Ayez close at their back,
So any movement retrograde he’ll stem,
Enforcing their commitment to his stratagem. 


14.
Suppose you are a bird flying above
The city, high enough so you can see
All of these armies as they start to move,
Cued by the sunrise, streaming gloriously
Across the peaceful landscape, suddenly
Transformed into a brutal killing ground;
You would not linger long, for you are free
To fly away before the fields are drowned
In blood; But let’s say you can’t leave —
                                                  you’re somehow bound.

15.
Then to your avian eye the scene below
Would strike you like the folding of a rose —
Not at the break of dawn, spreading to show
It’s loveliness, but rather at the close
Of day, turning its petals inward, those
Within the blossom tightening inside
The outer parts, whose slow grip will impose
A shrinking span upon the bloom, and hide
The inner petals, as you watch and glide.


* * *


16.
The picture of the closing rose please keep
In mind as we relate the struggles on the ground,
And time to time we’ll make the mental leap
From where the mortal sufferings abound
To that high vantage point, where sight and sound
Are softened by the calmer, distant view;
So as we raise our heads, we’ll not be downed
By pains and sorrows we must now live through;
Often unkind, the truth bids us be kind to you.

17.
First see the fighting at the northern wall,
Where good Enthuzias rejoins his band
To face the snakes again; But Artegall
Is not among his foes — now he must stand
And face the giant Pollopint, a grand,
Fat, fussing infant, who feels no remorse;
How eagerly he rushes with each hand
Extended, grasping, as his headlong course
Propels him through the shattered wall with giant force.

18.
And swarming at this ankles come the snakes,
A boiling tide of vipers in a coil,
Whose wave of hissing, stabbing killers takes
The Elven troops by storm; Although they toil
With pike and sword to fend off and to foil
Their foes, step by reluctant step they yield
The precious ground — their city’s hallowed soil,
As Sarcasm and Ridicule now wield
Their lances, prodding their mad snakes to sweep the field.

19.
Behind them rides the yawning Prince Enri,
Accompanied by his blithe entourage;
They come to reap the fruits of victory —
Whatever detritus the bricolage
Of Glorianna’s shambles of a lodge
Might yield to their deserving, outstretched hands;
The gold and goods their stewards will triage,
Distributing all bounty, coin, viands —
Whatever — as the languid Prince calls and commands.

20.
But at the front line of the deadly fight,
The inspiration is a different thing:
Attackers push and slash and thrust and bite,
Defenders ply their pikes, wearily swing
Their swords, hoping against all hope to bring
Their torment to conclusion, to conquer
On one hand, on the other hand to cling
To all they love, and once more to ensure
Their queen is safe, and no one lays a hand on her.

21.
Led by the giant child, the hissers drive
Into the northern sector’s market square;
Enthuzias rallies his troops, those left alive,
And tells them they must make their firm stand here.

Not one step back (he calls,) we do not dare,
Here in the shadow of the central tower;
Know that the queen looks down on you from there,
So summon now the last ounce of your power,
And stand and fight for her, enduring one more hour.

22.
At this the Elven band stiffens its line,
Strikes back and stalls Enri’s pressing advance,
Just as huge Pollopint begins to whine:

I’m bored! (he cries;) 
                                   Then gives a backward glance,
Decides the last place that he had a chance
For food and toys and things to satisfy
His giant appetite was in the army’s camps,
Where he felt loved and coddled, a far cry
From sticking pin pricks he endures, not knowing why.

23.
All done! he screams, and runs back out the breach
The way he came, straight through the northern wall,
Back to the camps; Enri, his captains, all beseech
The boy to turn around, rejoin the brawl;
But he ignores their desperate, pleading call.

The last thing that I think is always best,
He yells: The latest things are, after all,
The only things that matter; I detest
This boring battle — and besides I need my rest.

24.
Sarcasm! Ridicule! the Prince calls out,
It’s up to you to press from here on in!

Those mad captains respond, their ghoulish shout
Shocking the troops; The selfsame leering grin
Slashes the faces of each wretched twin,
For twins they are, spawn of Ironiette,
Wife of Satyre, but Enri’s wench; It’s been
Well known they are his bastard sons, and yet
Satyre still vainly claims them, to his shamed regret.

25.
Whipping their horses with wild, savage joy,
They plunge, each one, into the battle line;
Sarcasm, hungry, eager to employ
His lance upon someone besides supine
Subordinates, attacks; His bold design
Is to assault the army at its head;
He seeks their captain, and will not decline
To fight a single combat. 
                                         Oh, to shred
Him, heart and soul! (he crows) And suffering —  not dead.

26.
He fights his way up to the flag that shows
The place in line where he expects to see
Enthuzias among his struggling foes;
And he does see his mark, but also he
Can see his brother, simultaneously
Closing upon the Elven captain. 
                                                    Hey,
You! Ridicule! he cries: Attack with me
And follow my design to bleed and flay
Their captain til he begs us to put him away!

27.
My plan precisely! calls his laughing twin.

They fight their way along the battle front
Amid the swirl of combat and the din,
With busy lances, ever on the hunt
For where Enthuzias may stand, taking the brunt
Of the attack. 
                       He’s there! cries Ridicule.

His brother takes the cue, giving a grunt:
I see him, too. (Then cackling like a ghoul,)
Let’s whet our blades on that dull, sanctimonious fool.

28.
They pounce on him at once from different sides;
He tumbles to the ground, amid the dust
As each of his jeering tormentors rides
Him down, employing their sharp lances just
Enough to keep him off balance; Each thrust,
A minor cut itself, accumulates
Until the blood colors his clothes like rust;
He tries to stand as each blade bites and grates;
He gains his feet, but sure, another fall awaits.

29.
Then to his rescue come subordinates
From his band: joyous, bluff Camaraderie,
With ardent Gratitude; They rain down hits
On his tormentors, who, no longer free
To torture their captain, now clearly see
They must conclude their slow, cruel assault.

You hold them off, says Ridicule; For me,
I’ll finish him!
                          His brother says: That’s fine;
You take the captain — as for these two, they are mine.

30.
The thrusting and the cutting that ensues
Appalls the senses, letting loose a flood
Of suffering; So at this point we choose
To turn away just as the flow of blood,
Both innocent and guilty, understood
To be the provocation of the flaming rose,
Reaches its highest tide; Whatever good
Results, whatever ill, we will disclose
Hereafter in the story, as you may suppose.


* * *


31.
So once again we are the bird in flight,
Looking with blithe dispassion on the scene,
A dawn that feels more like the fall of night,
Circles of pain collapsing on the queen;
And back we go a space of time and lean
To look more closely at the army to the west,
Where Mammon bids his minions prance and preen,
Unleashing their assault at his behest,
With Onpresint the dragon leading all the rest.

32.
That dragon’s ponderous, enormous skull
Propels it forward thoughtlessly, with no
Regard for destination; Where the pull
Of gravity may lead, the beast will go
Confusing its direction with the flow
Of true progress; No mind for consequence,
As long as it can grow and grow and grow,
And only in the very literal sense —
Its great, fat head to grow yet fatter and more dense.

33.
This movement pushes through the western gate
Of Glorianna’s city at the dawn;
The dragon, propelled by his heavy pate,
Bursts straight through the timbers; With him are drawn
The crowd of Mammon’s troops, not much for brawn,
But sharp as can be with a wealth of tricks;
Their foes, less overwhelmed than put upon,
Reel in confusion, beaten by a mix
Of ruse, deception, bluffing, pose and cutting pricks.

34.
Those thrown off-balance in this way are cowed
And crushed by Onpresint’s big skull, or slain
By his oppressive breath, a blast endowed
With fury of a fiery hurricane;
Young Caritas commands the post of main
Resistance, but is steadily forced back
Into the western section; It is plain
He has scant means of stalling the attack;
His line begins to give way, and seems sure to crack.

35.
But his endurance and his energy,
Twin forces of his soul, suspend defeat;
Moving along with calm alacrity,
Up, down, among the line, he’s there to meet
Each fierce assault with fierce defense, to greet
Each soldier of his corps in such a way
Not one could ever contemplate retreat;
They take his lead and pitch into the fray,
Hoping against all hope that they can win the day.

36.
And so it is reported to the king
Far in the rear, where Mammon waits and frets.

Is there (he whines) no end to suffering
And sacrifice for me? The pressure gets
Intolerable; Well, how to fix this — threats?
Or gold?  Are they susceptible to shame?

Sire! (calls a captain;) I know how it sets;
They’ll yield to me, or I will take the blame;
Just send me — Captain Dominatio’s my name.

37.
Shouts Mammon: Go! 
                                     Another interrupts:
You can’t give him this chance and leave behind
One so deserving as myself — disrupts
The chain of your authority, and mind,
I cannot bear to be left out — unkind!

Enough, barks Mammon; Dominatio,
Take with you Jealouse, and perhaps you’ll find
His carping, whining pettiness will go
Well with your brutish ways to quell and quash the foe.

38.
So Dominatio pushes his way
Up to the front, dragging Jealouse along;
Once there, they see the cause of the delay
In the attack that started out so strong:
The dragon Onpresint has stopped among
The fallen foes for an unnatural feast,
And it will never stop until it’s wrung
The last disgusting bite from those deceased;
So Mammon can no longer count upon the beast.

39.
Now his appointed delegates, Jealouse
And Dominatio, take up the fight;
Pushing and bullying, they batter, bruise
Berate, intimidate with all their might
The common soldiers, who take greater fright
From their own captains than they do their foes;
While pushing, they are looking for the sight
Of Caritas among the battle throes;
Soon in the thick of things they see him trading blows.

40.
There is our target! Dominatio
Calls out; Jealouse, sneak up behind him —  quick!

I will! responds Jealouse; We’ll lay him low,
The puffed-up braggart! How he makes me sick!

Go now! growls Dom; How can you be so thick
To think your jabbering does ought to him?

Jealouse slips up behind and pulls the trick
Of grabbing Caritas, pinning each limb
In a perverse embrace, affection’s antonym.

41.
Now Dominatio shouts in his face:
The one who conquers all, conquered in turn,
Aren’t you, by mean Jealouse? Such a disgrace;
Now you will do as I instruct, or earn
A punishment from me; The world will learn
Who conquers whom; Order your men to lay
Their weapons down at once — time to adjourn
This battle and submit; You’ve had your day.

No, never (answers Caritas) do what you may.

42.
What I may do is put an end to you!
Roars Dominatio, raising his sword —
His hand is stopped before he follows through;
A swarm of Elven soldiers moving toward 
Their captain fight to save him, to afford
Him opportunity to break the grip
Of Jealouse, which he does; Sharp blows are scored
On every side, but skill and swordsmanship
Give way to bare hand savagery and knives that rip.

43.
The blind and thoughtless rage to dominate
The tenderest of feelings now goes on
With new combatants; It will not abate
Until either the rage or love are gone;
And so it proves here in this suffering dawn
Where Mammon’s army presses from the west;
We will resume our bird’s eye view upon
This point; In time we’ll learn about the rest
Of this fight at the western wall so fiercely pressed.


* * *


44.
Our rising pulls us up for but a brief
Reprieve, for we know there is more to tell:
See from the south, bearing a load of grief,
Grim Fides leads his army into hell
All in the name of paradise, a shell
Of an idea, an iceberg of a dream,
A static nightmare to the infidel;
To Fides, the great object of a scheme
Ordained by heavenly power, and his perpetual theme.

45.
He uses it to hypnotize with hope
Those lacking strength to face the fact of death;
And yes, there is no fact with which we cope
That challenges our courage more; No wealth
We may possess, no attributes, no youth
Nor comeliness compares in preciousness
To life itself; Confronted with the truth
That it is ours for such a skittish press
Of time, of course we seek relief from such distress.

46.
And Fides waits to pounce upon that fear,
Apply his lever on the trembling heart
To override the useful mind, and tear
Into calm judgment, ripping it apart,
Replacing it with logic chopped, a chart
Of rules and harsh strictures unmoored from sense,
Aimed chiefly to arrest, before its start,
Thinking, reflection, all intelligence;
Against an onslaught such as this, then, what defense?

47.
For surging from the south, his soldiers come,
Moving efficiently, despite the veils
That mask their eyes from seeing troublesome
Resistance to their march; The troop assails
The southern wall and gate; Resistance fails
To hold them at the wall; The soldiers reel
Before this certain tide; Nothing avails
Defenders but to flee. Chanting: Kneel! Kneel!
Fides’ army advances, steady in their zeal.

48.
Episthomas feels that the battle’s lost, 
But knows this feeling is the enemy
He must defeat before he can accost
The force of Fides’ arms effectively;
The moment that this thinking sets him free
From fear, he is astounded at the sight
Of Fides’ soldiers stopped to disagree
About the color of their veils; A fight
Erupts amongst themselves, contesting who is right.

49.
They fall upon their fellows savagely,
More violently than in their paused attack;
And with this pause, the Elven soldiers see
The opportunity to drive them back
Outside the city wall; Because they lack
The single-mindedness they shared at first,
Fides’ forces are herded like a pack
Of dogs back out the gate; It seems the worst
Of this assault has been repulsed, its power dispersed.

50.
But Fides greets his soldiers in retreat
Standing alone and holding in his hands
A weathered book from which he tears a sheet
And casts it to the wind; He understands
How this will move his simple warrior bands;
They stop, aghast, groaning and horrified.

What are you doing? one of them demands.

I’m aping you, he thunders; Cast aside
This spat, or see our holy scripture nullified!

51.
He tears another page. They beg him, Stop!
Our sacred book must not be torn apart!

He answers: You are tearing it! Now drop
Your vain dispute, and just as at the start
Of this attack, turn round; With all your heart
You must conquer the infidels; Turn round,
I say, or I shall tear our holy chart
To tatters, cast it on the filthy ground;
You’ll answer for your sins in hell, where you are bound.

52.
As if his words were flashing bolts of flame,
The minds of all his soldiers meld to one
Under the heat and pressure of the blame
His condemnation casts; Then on the run,
They turn, attack, chanting in unison,
Each desperate to earn eternal bliss
By taking lives; These sudden movements stun
The Elven army to paralysis;
Their reeling regiments cannot stand up to this.

53.
So once again they push inside the wall,
Around and through the splintered southern gate,
Driving Episthomas into a hall
Gracing the city’s school; Fury and hate
Erupt in Fides’ ranks, for they equate
A hall of learning with moral disgrace;
An angry frenzy to repudiate the place
Moves them to tear it down and leave no single trace.

54.
Episthomas is caught, bound, with a gag
Thrust in his mouth, just as Fides arrives.

Pull down these devil books, he says, and drag
Them in a pile; Much like the sacred lives
They ruin, they shall burn; Since this one thrives
Among them (he points to Episthomas)
Throw him into the pyre; It’s he who drives
The innocent down to perdition; This
Is punishment as just as it is obvious.

55.
Before this sentence can be carried out
More Elven soldiers burst into the hall
To rescue their commander; All about
The shelves and desks and stacks the soldiers brawl,
One force determined to suppress and stall
The workings of all honest human thought,
The other to resist this dismal fall;
Episthomas inspires his men’s onslaught,
But Fides’ force surrounds, confines them — 
                                                             they are caught.


* * *


56.
Again our view ascends, and looking down,
We see the swirling conflict as a flower
Steadily closing on itself; a crown
Collapsing; Then turn back another hour
When we find Glorianna in her tower,
Imaginatius with her, questioning
A prison guard. 
                          Speak up, and do not cower,
The city’s captain says; Perhaps you bring
Unwelcome news — speak quickly, minimize the sting.

57.
Your majesty, good captain, (pipes the guard,)
Our captives have escaped, I know not how;
The lock refused to hold them in their ward;
They pushed the door, it opened! And I vow
To bring them back, for we cannot allow . . .

Forgive my interruption, says the queen,
But tell me where you think they may be now?

I know, he says, for they were mighty keen
To fight, and that’s where they were going when last seen.

58.
Dear warden, thanks for all this you have told,
Says Glorianne; We’ll let the wild birds fly;
Escaped to fight? (She laughs;) What chains could hold
Them now, what iron bar, what wall so high
Could keep them in? I wonder who would try?
They’ll stand up for this city and for me —
Break out of prison for a chance to die!
They have escaped; So it was meant to be
Despite us; Now, I wish that I had set them free.

59.
I see them now, (Imaginatius says;
He peers out to the city on the eastern side
Of Glorianna’s tower through the bays
Facing the rising sun;) There is the tide
Of Archimago’s army; With a guide
I see both Fortus and Integritis
Hurry along to where the troops abide
Along the wall, awaiting the press
Of what will likely be the main assault, I guess.

60.
Tell me, inquires the queen, what leads you to
Believe the east will bring the main attack?

Her man replies: There’s light enough to view —
The flag of Archimago leads the pack;
Recall your knights wore capes, and they were black;
I see a vanguard robed in sable drapes
With Ayez’ army teeming at their back;
Likely these are your knights in their black capes,
Ayez behind, assuring that no one escapes.

61.
The queen says: We shall go to fight as well.

Imaginatius speaks in counterpose:
It will be soon enough, sorry to tell,
The fight will come to us, for once they close
With our few soldiers we can well suppose
The horde will drive them back; Expect to be
Caught in the thick of fighting all our foes
Right here, where we now stand — just wait and see.

Alright, she says, then bring a sword and shield to me.


* * *


62.
The eastern conflict we will rise to view
And notice as we rise the whipping mist
Accumulate around us, lightning, too,
With thunderous accompaniment whose fist
Of sound pounds down, and soon will not desist —
Continuous the flashing and the roar,
And then a pelting rain, whose drops consist 
Of icy crystals; As they fall they bore
Into the skin like needles — down and down they pour.

63.
It would be night but for the streaking sun
Between the storm’s black vault and the horizon,
Casting its desperate light upon the scene;
Great amber fingers stretch in benediction
Over the heads of those whose confrontation
Furiously churns the eastern gate and wall,
The killing rage, the blood, the mad ambition,
Mired in a red and yellow caste, whose pall
Is rocked by thunder, hectored by the harsh rain fall.

64.
And now our once calm vantage point is not
So comfortable; The swirling storm
Grows in intensity, and we are caught
Between the earth and sky, two realms aswarm
With violence; How to avoid the harm?
Beating our frantic wings, breathless with fear,
We dodge the lightning’s sizzling alarm,
Then shocks of wild explosions we can hear,
As from below smoke surges and too soon draws near.

65.
Four clouds thrust skyward, four in parallel,
One from each quarter of the siege below;
North, west, south, east, each quarter its own hell;
Black smoke and oily fires erupt and blow
Into the atmosphere; Nowhere to go
For our once safe observer; Where to fly
When storms above combine with storms below?
Impossible to rise above, to fly so high,
And yet to linger in the tumult is to die.

66.
But you are not a bird, and these are but
My fitful scratchings on a paper sheet;
We are quite safe, and we can always shut
This book and make our sure, secure retreat;
No. No, this is not how it feels; The heat
Rising from fires below, the freezing rain,
The helpless buffeting are all concrete
As anything I’ve known; My heart, my brain
Both shake with feeling — close the book,
                          the thoughts remain.

67.
I see I tricked myself as I tricked you —
I thought we would be safe flying so high;
But with you I have learned the truth: No view
Is so removed that trouble cannot fly
To reach you, shake you, toss you by and by;
The courage and the terror in my soul
Must battle on each day until I die;
No words scratched out on paper can control
This fight, yet, all along, perhaps this was my goal.

68.
Friend who has walked this path with me so far,
Pause with me now; We’ll rest our troubled minds,
Then see the battle through; Recall the star
Of Poverist, so high above the winds
And clouds — a light, a point of hope that binds
Us to tomorrow’s promise; At the dawn
We’ll fly again; We know each morning finds
Some reason for us to persist; We’re drawn
Into the storm and struggle, and we struggle on.

finis canto ix
Glorianna
Table of Contents
EpigraphsOde of DedicationProem
The Cantos
Canto ICanto VCanto IX
Canto IICanto VICanto X
Canto IIICanto VIICanto XI
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